Elevator Pitch No. 2

I didn't received much feedback for my first elevator. One person told me they thought it was fine. However, I didn't like the fact that I was looking back and forth between the camera and my script, so this time, I memorized my script a bit more than last time and angled the camera in a way that looks like I'm pitching to an audience not pictured. I think this looks more professional than the last pitch.



Elevator Pitch No.2